In class we have been learning persuasive writing, persuasive writing means you want something from the person that you are writing to. Here is an example:
School should be voluntary
I strongly believe that school should be voluntary, here are some reasons.
You could be too tired to come to school so you don't sleep in class. You could also be sick so you don't want to spew on anyone. You could come to school three times a week so you can still learn new things.
If we have school to be voluntary we could go on holiday for two days without family and friends to explore new places.
That is why school should be voluntary.
Your Sincerely
Emily
Welcome
Sunday, November 27, 2011
Wednesday, November 23, 2011
Manager of Cadbury Chocolate Factory
Dear, MR Willy Wonka
I wish to apply for the manager of Cadbury Chocolate Factory.
I got told by the Oompa Lumpas that they hated being not allowed to eat the chocolate that they made. So I will give them a quarter of it to share.
I also got told by the Geese that they don't like laying golden eggs unless they get some of it. So I will give them what they want.
I have sold way more chocolate bars than you and it will be good if you retire so you don't have to work.
A lot of people in my family think that I should own the Cadbury Chocolate Factory because they all like me and I think it would be a great job for me too.
Your Sincerely
Emily Donaldson
I wish to apply for the manager of Cadbury Chocolate Factory.
I got told by the Oompa Lumpas that they hated being not allowed to eat the chocolate that they made. So I will give them a quarter of it to share.
I also got told by the Geese that they don't like laying golden eggs unless they get some of it. So I will give them what they want.
I have sold way more chocolate bars than you and it will be good if you retire so you don't have to work.
A lot of people in my family think that I should own the Cadbury Chocolate Factory because they all like me and I think it would be a great job for me too.
Your Sincerely
Emily Donaldson
Wednesday, November 16, 2011
Jibboo
On Thursdays we have Jibboo, Jibboo is when you have fake money and you buy real things to keep or eat. We have Jobs to get paid, I am Hannah's Assistant and I get paid 30 snidges. It is run like the real world. I have a business where you sell real stuff and when you split up [normally you wouldn't] your group splits the money in half. Jibboo is really fun a teacher at our school taught us about it. A year 5 and 6 class do it which are room 7 & 8 we really like buying stuff. We can also be rich with fake money.
Monday, November 14, 2011
Art Work
This is my Art Work, I made this art work with Mrs Kahukura when we were checking it out with our class for two days, that is why I chose Visual art. The best thing I like about my art work is the Sun, because it stands out on the Korus and it looks like it makes them grow.
My favourite thing to use out of Pastels and Paint is Pastels because paint spills, but pastel doesn't.
My favourite thing to use out of Pastels and Paint is Pastels because paint spills, but pastel doesn't.
Sunday, November 13, 2011
Inquiry Relection
In term 4 we have been doing the arts which are, Visual Art, [Photography, Sculpture & Wearable arts] Music & Drama. I am doing Visual Art & Mrs Kahukura is taking it, Mr herring Is taking Sculpture & Photography. I am doing Wearable arts in Visual Art. My group is Devon S, Emma R & myself [Emily] we are making a leaf skirt with a birds nest hat with eggs. The key Elements for Visual Art are Line, Texture, Colour & Space. I like the arts this term. Especially Visual Art. We have been learning this for Inquiry which I really like.
Wednesday, November 9, 2011
Pet day
On the 7th of November we had a pet day. On pet days you bring your pet or toy to school, and you get it judged. Also you can bring sand saucers, Minature gardens, Vege art & Baking and it will get judged aswell. You can buy some cool stuff and it is really good to get your hair done and your face painted. Well any way it was the best day, because you got to buy sherbet and my hair was really cool because it was done by the awesomest hair dresses ever. Thank you for coming STREAK A HEAD we really give a big thank you. Well just before prizegiving we had a Ukelele group then, we had a Aerobics groups then, Recorder group then, Drumming to finish. then we had prizegiving. It was 23 degrees that day WOW that is hot!
Tuesday, September 6, 2011
Sunday, August 14, 2011
Sunday, June 26, 2011
I spy challenge
I spy a school bag , the number 2, a handbag,
the number 1, x8, a crocodile, a spotted box and a
black folder. Can you find a lid, a drink bottle lid too
and a open box.
Thursday, June 23, 2011
Jibboo
On Thursday the 23rd of June we had our 3rd Jibboo. Jibboo is where you have a business and sell things, like ice-blocks, brownie, juice, smoothies, home-made containers and pencils, bookmarks and popcorn. You have to pay sugar tax if you have something made out of sugar or has something with sugar added in it. Gambling is when you pay to win more money! NZ dollar is when you buy something from the shop and sell it at your business. We had lots of fun at our Jibboo!
Tuesday, May 17, 2011
Tuesday, April 12, 2011
Market day
On Monday the 11th of April it was market day. It was a normal day
except we set up instead of learning. At 12:30 we started market day
Nicole and I worked at Sarah and Kirsten's stall. It was a really fun day
and I won the raffle at the stall that I was working at.
except we set up instead of learning. At 12:30 we started market day
Nicole and I worked at Sarah and Kirsten's stall. It was a really fun day
and I won the raffle at the stall that I was working at.
My Acrostic poem
Everybody wants me to spell words.
Milly or Millicent would of been my first name.
Ice-cream yum!
Lollies are delicous.
Yellow is my least favourite colour.
Dad tickles me a lot.
On rainy days we have milos.
No-one is horrible to me.
Always on task.
Laughs most of the time.
Deers are my favourite animal.
Sentences are fun to write.
On and off is what to do when I am in the dark and light.
Never going to go in a tornado.
By Emily!
Milly or Millicent would of been my first name.
Ice-cream yum!
Lollies are delicous.
Yellow is my least favourite colour.
Dad tickles me a lot.
On rainy days we have milos.
No-one is horrible to me.
Always on task.
Laughs most of the time.
Deers are my favourite animal.
Sentences are fun to write.
On and off is what to do when I am in the dark and light.
Never going to go in a tornado.
By Emily!
Disaster
One evening, I was walking down the street, my family was at home I left at 6:30pm half an hour after tea.
There were a lot of cars going out of town one person stopped and put down the window and I asked the man where he was going, he said "out of town", "why" I asked he answered "because there is an earthquake coming in 10 minutes ." "oh, no", I said "my family." So I ran home it was too late I got pushed to the ground then I was wondering what it was then I got a thunder bolt of lightning it was an earthquake. I didn't care if you weren't supposed to run when an earthquake happened, but I had to. So I ran all the way home I went inside I looked everywhere they weren't there they just got hit so that means I should look under bricks and rocks I found everyone, but they weren't hurt so we quickly ran to the big buses or trucks and drove as fast as we could we got there perfectly we had to stay at a flat that was free in
Dunedin. Finally we got there we lived in the flat forever.
The End
There were a lot of cars going out of town one person stopped and put down the window and I asked the man where he was going, he said "out of town", "why" I asked he answered "because there is an earthquake coming in 10 minutes ." "oh, no", I said "my family." So I ran home it was too late I got pushed to the ground then I was wondering what it was then I got a thunder bolt of lightning it was an earthquake. I didn't care if you weren't supposed to run when an earthquake happened, but I had to. So I ran all the way home I went inside I looked everywhere they weren't there they just got hit so that means I should look under bricks and rocks I found everyone, but they weren't hurt so we quickly ran to the big buses or trucks and drove as fast as we could we got there perfectly we had to stay at a flat that was free in
Dunedin. Finally we got there we lived in the flat forever.
The End
Thursday, April 7, 2011
Teachers only day
Hi
On the 7th of april was teachers only day it is when only the teachers go to school and
listen to things that they need to do. That was a fun day.
On the 7th of april was teachers only day it is when only the teachers go to school and
listen to things that they need to do. That was a fun day.
Tuesday, March 29, 2011
My Earthquake keynote
Earthquake Keynote
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Tuesday, March 22, 2011
Habbits of mind
Hi it's me I'm posting about what happened at school I'm learning habbits of mind
well the teacher put out pebbles in front of the people sitting on the table and we talked about habbits of mind then we ate them. We shared them between the kids who were
sitting at the table.
well the teacher put out pebbles in front of the people sitting on the table and we talked about habbits of mind then we ate them. We shared them between the kids who were
sitting at the table.
Sunday, March 20, 2011
Epals
Hi, it's me again I'm just here to say about epals. Epals is going along perfect I've got a girl called Callista Hopkins I hopefully get my letter back from her. I'm going to hopefully send to her again and again.
Emily's Awesome Learning Blog
Hi, I hope you like this blog I have been excited about making it. I want to share my learning with you.
Hope you like my blog.
Hope you like my blog.
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